09. 慰问信——2025年高考备考英语应用文写作快速突破 答案版.docx

09.慰问信——2025年高考备考英语应用文写作快速突破

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【最新真题、模拟题、联考试题】

1．DearVictor,

Ihopethisletterfindsyouinabetterstateofhealth.Uponhearingofyourillness,Iamreallyconcernedandsendyoumybestwishesforaspeedyrecovery.Ithinkitmightcheeryouupalittletoknowtheupdateshereatschool.

Inyourabsence,theschoolhasbeenbuzzingwithactivities.LastweekwitnessedawonderfulexhibitionoftraditionalChinesepaintingbothbyteachersandstudentsintheschoolsgallery.Someofthepaintingsareofexceptionalbeautyandquality.Ifoundmyselfparticularlydrawntorelaxinglandscapepaintings,whichtemporarilyfreedmefromthedailyroutines.

Hopefullyyoucanmakeittotheone-monthexhibitionafteryourrecovery.Takecareofyourselfandgetbetter.

【导语】

本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给最近生病的外教Victor写电子邮件表示安慰，并分享学校最近举办的师生国画作品展活动。

【解析】

1.词汇积累

希望：hope→wish

担忧的：concerned→worried

非凡的：exceptional→extraordinary

照顾：takecareof→lookafter

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Uponhearingofyourillness,Iamreallyconcernedandsendyoumybestwishesforaspeedyrecovery.

拓展句：IamreallyconcernedandsendyoumybestwishesforaspeedyrecoveryassoonasIhearofyourillness.

【点睛】

【高分句型1】Ihopethisletterfindsyouinabetterstateofhealth.(运用了省略that引导的宾语从句)

【高分句型2】Ifoundmyselfparticularlydrawntorelaxinglandscapepaintings,whichtemporarilyfreedmefromthedailyroutines.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)

2．DearAnna,

I’msorrytohearaboutyourunsuccessfulbidforthestudentcouncil.Failurecanbetough,butremember,asWinstonChurchillsaid,“Successisnotfinal,failureisnotfatal;itisthecouragetocontinuethatcounts.”So,dontletonesmallfailurestandinyourway.

ThinkofEdison,whofailedthousandsoftimesbeforeinventingthelightbulb.Hiscouragetopersevereledtoaworld-changingdiscovery.You,too,havethepotentialtoovercomethissetback.Don’tletthisfailuredefineyou;letitbeasteppingstonetogreatersuccess.

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