咨询信写作指导.ppt

DearSir/Madam

MyfamilyareplanningavisittoHongKongDisneylandthissummer.I’vegotsomeinformationabouttheticketpricesontheInternetandnowI’mwritingforsomedetailedinformation.;Iwonderwhetherchildrenunder3needtopayforaticketandwhatisthedifferencebetweenapeakdayticketandaspecialdayticket.Isitpossibleforustogetadiscountifwebuyticketsasagroup?CanwebookticketsthroughtheInternet?Besides,I’dliketoknowifweareallowedtocancelourticketbookingsifwecannotmakethetripforpersonalreasons.;Thanksforyourattention.Yourtimelyreplywouldbehighlyappreciated.

Yourssincerely,

LiHua;1.书写太随意，字母大小不一

2.修改多，痕迹明显，破坏整体

3.格式不完整，签名不到位

4.套用句式不够熟练，差强人意

5.写好后不修改，低级错误多;可否网上订票？;团体订票是否可以打折？;可否因故取消订票？;两种票有何区别？;三岁以下孩子是否需要买票？;一些信息不清，请解释