高考英语应用文写作表达必备微技能（全国）14日记类.pdf

14日记类

年，上海卷）

(2012Directions:WriteanEnglishcompositionin120-150wordsaccordingto

theinstructionsgivenbelowinChinese.

上周一，你在一所小学观摩了小女孩Amy所在班级的两堂绘画课（如图所示），回家后你用

英语写了一篇日记，内容包括：

1.对两堂绘画课的具体描述；

2.你从中获得的启发。

【参考答案】

Date:June8,2012

Lastweek,Isatinontwopaintingclassesataprimaryschool.Inoneclassastudentdipped

herfeetininkandmadeapaintingoutoffootprints.Bycontrast,thesamestudentusedabrushto

makeabreath-takinglandscapepainting—sovividthatonecouldalmostsmelltherefreshing

riversandhearthechirpingbirds.

Thoughstandinginstarkcontrast,thetwopaintingsbothintriguedme.Infact,theyreminded

meofwhatFacebookfounderMarkZuckerbergsaid,“Keepyoureyesonthestarsandyourfeet

ontheground.”It’sthismaximonsuccessthatlendsinsightintothetwopaintings.Thefirst

paintingrepresentsthatweshouldremaingroundedandbecautiousofbeingcarriedawaywith

temporarysuccess.Akitestaysafloatbecauseit’sattachedtoareel;otherwiseitwillinstantlylose

itsbalancebeforeeventuallycrashingintotheground.Soitiswithus.

However,successrequiresmorethanbeingsimplydown-to-earth,withaloftyidealbeing

anothercrucialfactor.Sograndwasthesceneryportrayedinthesecondpaintingthatitembodied

thereachofourdreams.Insteadofignoringthegleamoflight,thesparkofwisdomthatflashes

acrossourmindandworshippingthelusteroftheskyofgeniuses,we’dbebetterofftrustingthat

thegleamandthesparkwillonedayshineasbrightlyasasearchlightifwehavefaithin

ourselves.

Thepaintingstaughtmetodreambigandactsmall.AndIbelieve,bydoingso,thewarm

lightofsuccesswillcascadeintomylife.

【范文点评】

这是一篇看图写话，体裁是日记的形式。内含两个要点：介绍对两堂绘画课的具体描述

和你从中获得的启发。文章要紧紧围绕这两个要点展开。各个要点表达要清晰，要点要根据

图的内容进行具体描述。然后谈谈自己的启发。层次要分明，衔接要自然。需要考生自己做

合理的联想，启发要有新意，内容要符合图的逻辑。

日记分为记事型、议论型、描写型和抒情型。建议大家在学习写日记的过程中，