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细节描写SkillsofContinuationWriting---Learn“toshow”ratherthan“totell”

21.Tellthedifferencebetweentellingandshowing2.Masteradvancedwords,phrasesandfivesentencepatterns3.Write“toshow”sentencestodescribemoodsandactions.Learningobjectives

showthereaderseverything,tellthemnothingErnestHemingway

“Show！Donttell”Writingskill必杀技

ToShowToTellVS概括描写细节描写Toshow:towritewithmoresensory(感官的)details,allowingyourreaderstohear,see,taste,touchandsmellthesamethingsyourcharactersareexperiencing.

Howdidshefeel？Shefelthappy/excited.abstract(抽象的）Totell

1.Hereyeswere__________(v.闪耀，发光)likediamonds.Toshow2.Hereyes____________________（v.闪亮，闪烁)withpleasure.3.She_________(v.咧着嘴笑，露齿而笑）fromeartoear.facegrinnedtwinkled/sparkled/shonesparkling/twinkling/shining在空格处填入恰当的单词或短语表达喜悦。shinegrinsparkletwinklejumpupanddownjumptoone’sfeetclapgiggle

82.Sohappywasshethatshe____________（跳起来）1.She_______(herhands（鼓掌）and_______________withjoy.（跳上跳下，欣喜若狂）Toshowbodyclappedjumpedupanddownjumpedtoherfeet

9ToshowShe_________(咯咯）withexcitement.voice写作建议：心理描写要抓住眼、嘴、手、脚等身体部位具体描述，会更加传神！giggled

Totell:Hewasangry.Toshow:1.Hisface________（v.脸色阴沉下来）withanger.2.He__________me（怒视）withburningeyesandclenchedteeth.3.Hefeltsoangrythathe_______________theroom,___________(v-ing形式）thedoorbehindhim.(冲出教室，狠狠摔门）4.___________（v-ing形式）(怒火中烧）,he__________———————(紧握拳头）。5.He_______（growl咆哮）atmethroughclenchedteeth.在空格处填入恰当的单词或短语表达愤怒。growlcloudglareatslamstormoutofclenchonesfistsboilingwithrage

1.Hisface________（v.脸色阴沉下来）withanger.