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层级十二吸引眼球的亮点词汇

2024年高考阅卷老师说：“我们通常在1分钟内阅完一篇作文并给分，由于长时间阅卷带来的疲惫，一般的词汇只会让我们产生视觉疲惫，但假如一篇作文中有几个不落俗套的高频词汇，会让我们眼前一亮。”

【美句输入】

一、“语”众不同，避开人云亦云

写作时恰当得体地运用别人可能想不到的词汇或表达，会给阅卷老师耳目一新的感觉。

①[2024·全国甲卷，书面表达]Isincerelyhopeyoucanhelpme．

→Isincerelyhopeyoucandomeafavour/givemeahand．

②[2024·天津卷，满分作文]Asayoungman,Imsurethatthefutureisbrightinfrontofme.

→Asayoungman,Imconfidentthatthefutureisbrightinfrontofme.

③[2024·北京卷]Ihopeyoucanforgivemeandconsidermysuggestion.

→Ihopeyoucanforgivemeandtakemyapplicationintoconsideration．

④[2024·全国Ⅱ卷，书面表达]Thefarmliesatthefootofamountain,wheretheskyisblueandtheairisfresh.Weweredeeplyimpressedbythebeautifulscenery.

→Thefarmissituatedatthefootofamountain,wheretheskyisblueandtheairisfresh.Weweredeeplyimpressedbytheattractivescenery.

⑤[2024·江苏卷，书面表达]ChinahasalwaysbeenanattractionforthosewholoveChineseculture.

→ChinahasalwaysbeenanattractionforthosewhoarekeenonChineseculture.

⑥[2024·全国甲卷，书面表达]Furthermore,guzhengisveryimportanttoChinesefolkmusicleadingyoutoafantasticworldofmusic.

→Furthermore，guzhengisofgreatsignificancetoChinesefolkmusicleadingyoutoafantasticworldofmusic.

⑦[2024·全国Ⅲ卷，书面表达]However,theadaptionisquitedifficult．

→However,theadaptionisquitechallenging.

二、更新换代，避开重复

写作时应尽量避开重复运用相同的词语，要用贴切多样的词语来展示自己的水平。用词不同、表达方式迥异也是增分之处。

Onhearingthenews,someofmyclassmatesandIformedagrouptojoininthecompetition.Iknowyouoncetookpartinaroboticscompetitionandwontheaward,soyoumusthaveaccumulatedmuchexperienceinit.

→Onhearingthenews,someofmyclassmatesandIformedagrouptotakepartinthecompetition.Iknowyouonceparticipatedinaroboticscompetitionandwontheaward,soyoumusthaveaccumulatedmuchexperienceinit.

三、词汇运用，短语优先

当单词和短语表示同一个意思时，优先运用短语。恰当运用短语，一方面能使文章更加生动，另一方面也能展示出学生扎实的语言功底。

①[全国Ⅰ卷，书面表达]Besides,IknowEnglisha