模块ⅧUnit4创新作文市公开课金奖市赛课一等奖课件.pptx

第1页;节约用水

【写作任务】

请看下面这幅漫画，联系实际生活，以“SavingWater”为题写一篇短文，词数120左右。;【思绪点拨】

1．本文形式上像看图写作，事实上是半开放写作。由于学生有很大发挥空间。

2．本文常规上以三个层面或段落来完毕：①叙述图画；②分析图画；③提出提议。

3．时态宜用普通现在时，有些地方要用适当情态动词，should，oughtto，must，can等。;【词汇热身】

1．________饮用水

2．pay________注意

3．take...________考虑

4．to________首先

5．from________to________越来越差

6．________somelaws通过一些法律

【答案】1.drinkingwater2.attentionto3.intoconsideration/account4.beginwith5.bad；worse6.pass;【一句多译】

1．自来水在无人使用时还在流淌。

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2．???有这样才干处理浪费水问题。

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②____________________________________________;【答案】1.①Thedrinkingwaterisstillrunningwhilenooneisusingit.

②Thedrinkingwaterisstillrunningwithoutanyoneusingit.

③Somepeopleleave/havedrinkingwaterrunningafterusingit.

2．①Wecansolvetheproblemofwater-wastinginthisway.

②Onlyinthiswaycanwesolvetheproblemofwater-wasting.;【自主操练】

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【自我校正】

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Asisshowninthepicture，thedrinkingwaterisrunningwithout_anyone_using_it.①Thepicturetellsusnowmanypeoplepaynoattentiontosavingwater.

Theimplied②meaningofthispictureshould_be_taken_into_consideration_seriously.③Tobegin_with，④wateristhesourceoflife，without_which⑤therecouldbenolifeontheearth.Second，thereisverylimitedavailablewaterresourceonourplanet，andexcessiveusingofwatercanmakethesituationfrom_bad_to_worse.⑥Andthissocialproblemshouldarousethegreatconcernofallintheworld.;Inmyopinion/Asforme,weshouldtakestrongmeasurestodealwiththeproblem.First，weshouldmakeallthepeopleknowtheimportanceofwaterandthefactthatwaterresourcesarelimited.Second，wemustpasssomelawstopunishthosewhowastewater.Only_in_this_way_can_we_solve_the_problem_of_water-wasting.⑦;【名师点评】

①介词复合结