专题五 写作-题型3 短文改错-题组四.pptxVIP

专题五写作题型3短文改错题组四Passage1.（2019全国卷Ⅰ，10分）Ibecameinterestinginplayingfootballthankstoasmallaccident.OneafternoonwhereIwasinprimaryschool,Iwaswalkingbytheschoolplayground.Suddenlyfootballfelljustinfrontofmebutalmosthitme.Istoppedtheballandkickedithardlybacktotheplayground.Toeveryonessurprising,theballwentintothenet.Allthefootballplayerontheplaygroundcheeredloudly,saythatIhadatalentforfootball.Fromnowon,Istartedtoplaymyfootballwithclassmatesafterschool.Iamagoodplayernow.?[答案]Ibecameinplayingfootballthankstoasmallaccident.OneafternoonIwasinprimaryschool,Iwaswalkingbytheschoolplayground.Suddenlyfootballfelljustinfrontofmealmosthitme.Istoppedtheballandkickeditbacktotheplayground.Toeveryones,theballwentintothenet.Allthefootballontheplaygroundcheeredloudly,thatIhadatalentforfootball.Fromon,Istartedtoplayfootballwithclassmatesafterschool.Iamagoodplayernow.[解析]①考查形容词。短语becomeinterestedin意为对……感兴趣。interesting有趣的，吸引人的，通常描述事物。interested感兴趣的，通常描述人的感受。此处表示感兴趣，故把interesting改为interested。②考查定语从句。本句含有一个定语从句，先行词为Oneafternoon，且关系词在从句中作时间状语，应用关系副词when。故把where改为when。③考查冠词。football足球是可数名词，且其发音以辅音音素开头，故应加不定冠词a，表示泛指。④考查逻辑关系。连词but表示转折，而此处表示两个动作的顺承，故用并列连词and。⑤考查副词。副词hardly意为几乎不,而hard作副词讲时，意为用力地。此处表示我用力把球踢回操场，故把hardly改为hard。⑥考查习惯用语。短语toonessurprise意为使某人惊讶的是，ones之后应接名词，故把surprising改为surprise。⑦考查名词单复数。句中的player运动员为可数名词，再结合all可知，应用其复数形式。allthefootballplayers意为所有的足球运动员。⑧考查非谓语动词。句中的say与其逻辑主语是主谓关系，且其表示的动作与谓语动作同时发生，应用现在分词作状语，表示伴随状况。⑨考查副词。此处表示从那时起，应用fromthenon，故把now改为then。⑩考查代词。动词play与球类名词连用时，名词前不加冠词或代词，故删除my。主题考点分布词数难度动非谓语形/副名介连代冠喜欢上足球运动0132021195★★★Passage2.（2019全国卷Ⅱ，10分）SinceIwasakid,IveconsidereddifferentjobIwouldliketodo.First,Iwantedtobeafireman,whoseuniformlookedsocoolly.Then,whenIwasinthefivegrade,IwantedtobeateacherbecauseIlikedmyEn