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冬日探险受困;学生习作典型错误分析;65-year-oldMr.Fairfaxhadretiredfromteaching.Hewasveryinterestedinadventure.Thistimehemadeanadventureonasparsely(稀少地)populatedland.Inthecoldwinter,hetriedanewplaceandforgottobringhiscellphone,theonlytimeonthetrip.Hetrekked(艰苦跋涉)morethanhalfanmilewithtwodogstoaharvestedwheatfield.
Eyesfixedonthehorizoninexpectationofanotherrabbit,Mr.Fairfaxsteppedonthethinsnowonacanal.Suddenly,itcollapsed(坍塌)anddroppedhimfourfeettothebottom.
Realizingthathewasintroubleandwasgoingtohurthimself,Mr.Fairfaxwassuddenlypickingupalotofspeed.Hisleftleghitfirst,andhelayonhissidetoreachforhisshotgun,unloadeditanduseditasacrutch(拐杖).Hespentanhourandahalfclimbingthecanalbutslippedandslidbackdownwhenhewaspartlyup.Thistime,oneofhisfeetgotstuckbetweentworocks.Mr.Fairfaxtoldhimselfthatifhedidn’tgethimselfoutofthatcanal,hewasn’tgoingtohaveaverygoodnight.
Mr.Fairfaxwalkedhisfootfreeandclimbedmoreslowlyandcautiouslyoutofthecanal.Heimmediatelyrealizedthedifficultyofthetaskbeforehim.Theaccidentoccurredabout2p.m.,anditwasnearing5p.m.withtheroadfarawayasthesunwassetting.
Mr.Fairfaxfocusedoncrawlingtosafety.Evenwithhisgunsupportinghim,hoppingwasimpractical.Instead,hesatdownandpushedhimselfbackwardlessthan40inchesatatimewithhisgoodleg.Hewasdeterminedandsurethathemustholdon.Hewasinexhaustionandhadmorefrequentbreaks.Temperaturesdroppedovernight,andhisglovesandbootsgotwet.Hishandsandfeetsoonwerecompletelynumb.
Para.1Mr.Fairfax’sdogshadbeenplayinginthefieldandeventuallycampuptohim.____
Para.2However,gleams(微光)ofdaylightremained----Mr.Fairfaxsawthesixthcar.____
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学生习作典型问题分析;Part1:学生典型问题---文本内容回顾(5W1H);Part1:学生典型问题;与原文
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