【小升初】英语作文指导与欣赏-vacation 写作指导.docVIP

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Thevacation

写一篇关于自己旅行的作文。

Haveatrip!

ItravelledtoHainanislandthissummerholiday.

Itwassobeautifulthere.Theblueseawasaroundus.

It′sverywideandverynice.Thecoconutmilkwasdelicious.Ilikeditsomuch.Ialsolikedtoswimthere.IwashappyandIlookedlikeafish.

Iwillalsocomehereforanothertripthenextsummerholiday,becauseitisaniceplacewithabeautifulsceneryanddelicioussfood.

词汇：

swim，summerholiday（暑假），delicious（美味的）

习作点评：

文章描绘了海南岛的风景美食，以及自己愉快的心情，不愧是一篇美文。

佳作赏析：

AvisittoBeijing

Thissummervacation,IwenttoBeijing.Itwasaverygreatcity!

WewenttotheGreatWallfirst.Likeitsname,itwasverygreat.Wecouldseemanymountainsaroundandmanyforeigners.

ThenwewenttovisitTiananmenSquare.Itwasalsofantastic.Thereweresomanypeopleonthesquare,somewereflyingkites,someweretakingphotos.

WelivedinasmallhouseinBeijing.ItwasatraditionalBeijingbuildingcalled“Four-SectionCompound”.

IenjoyedmyselfalotduringthesummervacationinBeijing.Itwasagreatmemory!

作文点评：

本篇作文详细叙述了自己去北京游玩的全过程。先是北京的theGreatWall，再去了TiananmenSquare，最后又描述了Four-SectionCompound，把读者带进了一场快乐的北京旅途，充满趣味