老师写作高分秘笈.pdfVIP

•THINGSABOUTWRITING:

•1、sentencestructure

•2、paperstructure:head,body,conclusion

•3、modelEssay

1、sentencestructure

Warm-up

简单句复杂句

•话题：选择、人生迷茫、犹豫不决

•hina,manyundergraduatesfeelhelplessto

choosetheirgoal.

•hina,manyundergraduatesfeelhelplessto

choosetheirgoal.

•hina,40%moreorlessof

•undergraduatesfeelhelplesstochoosetheirgoal.

•hina,40%moreorlessofundergraduates

feelhelplesstochoosetheirgoal.

•hina,40%moreorlessofundergraduates

feelhelplessinthefaceofwhethertograduate

forajobortopursueahigherdegree.

•hina,40%moreorlessof

undergraduatesfeelhelplessinthefaceof

whethertograduateforajobortopursue

ahigherdegree.

•Itisunveiledbyarecentsurveythathina,

40%moreorlessofundergraduatesfeel

helplessinthefaceofwhethertograduatefor

ajobortopursueahigherdegree.

•Itisunveiledbyarecentsurveythathina,

40%moreorlessofundergraduatesfeel

helplessinthefaceofwhethertograduatefor

ajobortopursueahigherdegree.

•Itisunveiledbyarecentsurveyinitiatedby

Dailythathina,40%moreorlessof

undergraduatesinvestigatedfeelhelplessintheface

ofwhethertograduateforajobortopursuea

higherdegree.

2、paperstructure

head,body,conclusion

what====background(chart/phenomenon)

•why★===mainidea+yses(reasons/

effects)+cases

•how===conclusion(echothemainidea)/

suggestions/future

3.ModelEssays

第一大类

双向话题作文

（考查）

TheFragranceAlwaysStaysInTheHand

ThatGivesTheRose

•Whenamani