-2024届高考英语作文复习专项读后续写微技巧：动作链与情绪描写课件.pptx

ContinousWriting:

Allactionsdescribedindetails.(期末英语作文保证20分的技巧之)：①Actionchains

vivid

imagery

1.Detaildescriptionofallactions-verbschain细致描写某一具体情况下的动作，创作生动的画面感，人物的内心活动,处事态度，思想品质跃然纸上，让人物活灵活现，推动情节的发展。Detaileddescriptionofaspecificsituationoftheaction,tocreateavividsenseofthepicture,thecharactersinneractivities,attitudes,qualityofthoughtseemstoappearonthepaper,sothatitcanbringthecharactertolifeandpromotethedevelopmentoftheplot.

e.g.Jimscreamed.→Jimscreamedatthetopofhisvoice,stormedoutoftheroom.→Jimscreamedatthetopofhisvoice,stormedoutoftheroomandslammedthedoorheavilybehindhim.吉姆尖叫一声，冲出房间，在他身后重重地关上了门。Sentencepartten1：

V→VaandVb./VaandVb,andVc

PracticeMakesPerfect！Imitatewriting：1.我把手伸进口袋里，掏出一把零钱，递到饥饿的乞丐面前。Ideepintoitmypocket,ahandfulofchange,andtothehungrybeggar.2.他跳进水里，试图救那个小女孩。Hethewaterandthelittlegirl.3.他踏进教室,悄悄地放下了书包，开始假装做笔记。Hetheclassroom,quietlyhisbag,andbeganto.jumpedintotriedtosavereachedpulledouthandedsteppedintopretendtotakenotesputdown

E.g.①：Step1：Constructaactionschain她一把抱住儿子。Shegatheredhersonintoherarms.1.她冲向前+蹲下来+一把抱住儿子。Shedashedforward,kneltdownandgatheredhersonintoherarms.Step2：Addemotions2.她冲向前+蹲下来+一把抱住儿子，眼泪止不住的流。Shedashedforward,kneltdownandgatheredhersonintoherarmswithtearsrollingdownhercheeks.3.急切兴奋，她冲向前+蹲下来+一把抱住儿子，眼泪止不住的流。Eagerandexcited,shedashedforward,kneltdownandgatheredhersonintoherarmswithtearsrollingdownhercheeks.Sentencepartten1：Verbschain+emotions

ContinousWriting:

Emotionscanbeshowedindetails.(期末英语作文保证20分的技巧之)：②emotionalexpressedbyactions

sentencepattern1：例：某人听到/看到