04 读后续写：万能升华主旨句2-成长型（PPT课件版）.pptx

读后续写：主旨升华句（成长型） Part 1 成长类故事构造“三部曲” 01成长前的苦恼（负面情绪塑造） 02成长中（蜕变塑造） 03成长后的升华（喜悦+感激+升华） 第一步：成长前的苦恼（负面情绪塑造）1、孤独我从来不轻易交朋友，有一段时间，我除了和一些男孩谈笑风生之外，几乎没有做什么。I never made friends easily(从不容易交朋友), and for a time I did little more than get on speaking terms with some boys. 第一步：成长前的苦恼（负面情绪塑造）2、伤心我在口袋里什么也没发现，这个事实就像一把长矛刺进我的心脏，立刻开始流血。I found nothing in my pocket, a fact that seemed like a spear piercing into my heart which started to bleed immediately. 看了看周围，我焦急地几乎哭了起来。 Looking around anxiously, I almost burst into crying. 就在我崩溃的时候，克劳利带领的一群男孩从我身边走过。Just at the time I broke down, a group of boys led by Crawley passed me. 成长前的苦恼（负面情绪塑造）3、惭愧她充满了内疚和羞愧。She was overwhelmed / overcome/ consumed with guilt and shame (被内疚和羞愧淹没). （2020.11月潍坊高三英语期中考试）她突然活跃起来，挥动着患关节炎的双手。Suddenly she came alive（精神就为之一振）,waving her arthritic(关节炎的) hands.一股罪恶感席卷了我，我不得不承认我去看电影了，这就是我迟到的真正原因。A wave of guilt swept over me(一阵恐惧向我袭来) and I had to admit the fact that I had gone to the movies and that was the real reason why I was late. 绝望我妈妈不让我带，”我撒谎，绝望在我心中沸腾。“My mother wouldnt let me bring it,” I lied, desperation boiling inside me.嘲笑他们大声地笑着，像是在尖叫“多漂亮的破表啊！”。They laughed loudly with Crawley screaming words like “What a finest broken watch!”第一步：成长前的苦恼（负面情绪塑造） 成长前的苦恼（负面情绪塑造）6、紧张与此同时，Karie不安地坐在座位上，双手交叉。Meanwhile, Karie sat restlessly in her seat with her fingers crossed (她的手指交叉着). （2020.11月潍坊高三英语期中考试）她把真相告诉了老师，心怦怦直跳。She told the teacher the truth , with her heart thumping / pounding/ pumping like a drum(她的心跳得像打鼓一样). （2020.11月潍坊高三英语期中考试）在老师办公室前不安地踱来踱去，她终于鼓起勇气，迈着沉重的步伐地走了进去。Having paced up and down restlessly(不安地来回走动) in front of the the teachers office, she finally gathered courage and plodded in.（2020.11月潍坊高三英语期中考试） 成长前的苦恼（负面情绪塑造）7、害怕我不自觉地避免与任何人交流，因为我怕他们当面嘲笑我。I unknowingly (不知不觉地) avoided interacting (interact) with anyone because I was afraid they’d laugh in my face(我很害怕他们会当面取笑我) . 第二步：成长中（蜕变塑造）1、惊讶罗西夫人惊讶地扬起眉毛，惊呆了，仿佛定格在那里一样。Raising her eyebrows in surprise, Mrs Rossi froze, as if rooted on the ground（仿佛定格在那里）2、希望杰斯抬起头看着他，