05 读后续写：万能升华主旨句3-脱险型（PPT课件版）.pptx

读后续写：主旨升华句3（脱险型） Part 1困境类场景描写环境描写（恶劣）情绪描写（绝望、恐惧+挣扎）转机描写-描写声音传来或看见了什么情绪描写（希望+努力）脱险描写情绪描写（感恩+高兴）主旨描写 环境描写（恶劣）——波涛汹涌：当我继续往前漂的时候，一个巨浪呼啸着向我们逼近。As I floated on, a huge wave (一个巨浪) whistled (呼啸而来)and approached us.大风从耳边呼啸而过，我们被推离海岸越来越远。The big wind roared through our ears (在耳边咆哮), and we were pushed away from the shore farther and farther.我所有的感觉都告诉我一个大浪就要来了。All my senses told me that a big wave was about to come.(即将来临)一个看似猛烈的海浪正向我们袭来。A powerful-looking(看似猛烈的)wave was coming towards us.? (靠近我们) 环境描写（恶劣）——鲨鱼的可怕：那是一条鲨鱼，一条巨大的鲨鱼，在离她不远的地方游来游去。It was a shark, a massive shark that was swimming around, not far away from her.鲨鱼的下颚张开，露出一排排锋利的牙齿。The shark’s jaws opened wide, showing rows of sharp teeth. 环境描写（恶劣）——陆地上的水：雨滴疯狂地打在挡风玻璃上，天空笼罩在一片灰色之中。Splashing raindrops hit the windshield frantically and the skies were overhung with a blanket of grey,.水不停地涨，仿佛要把我活吞下去。The water kept rising, as if it would?engulf?me alive.不幸的是，水涌了进来，水涨到了我的腰上。【在水里行走（不可能rush, dash）】Unfortunately, the water poured in and crept upon my waist.? 环境描写（恶劣）——推荐句型：The wind blows/whistles/howls/picks up/whips through sth/sweeps across sth.风刮/飕飕的刮/呼啸而过/愈刮愈大/刮过……/掠过……They were getting?drenched by icy water.他们被冰冷的水浇透了。The heavy rain was violently?beating?against the window.大雨疯狂地击打窗户。The rain?drummed?on the roof of the building.雨不停地击打着房预。The furious storm is?grumbling?outside.狂风暴雨在室外呼啸着。 环境描写（恶劣）——推荐句型：6.The icy wind started?howling,?stinging?my face.寒风开始咆哮，刺痛了我的脸。7.?A flash of?lightning?lit up?the whole sky.一道闪电点亮了整个天空。8. The sharp?claps?of thunder?pierced?the quiet night.声声清脆的雷声划破了宁静的夜晚。9.The bolt of lightning?stabs?the earth. 一道闪电划过天空。10. 天空和海洋融为一体| the sky and the ocean?melt into?each other? 二、情绪描写（绝望、恐惧+挣扎）——疲倦/寒冷盐刺痛我的眼睛，我几乎不知道我还能坚持多久。Salt stinging(刺痛) my eyes, I could hardly tell how long I could hold on.随着时间的流逝，疲惫感席卷着我们，我们的脚僵硬/麻木和颤抖着。Time passing us, tiredness?engulfed?(包围了) us with my feet?stiff/numb?(僵硬/麻木)and?shivering.尽管我们筋疲力尽，我们没有停止。咬紧牙关，我们继续游泳。Exhausted as we were?(尽管很累), we didn’t stop. Gritting our teeth, we