读后续写之让动作描写更加生动课件-2024届高考英语作文复习专项.pptx

How can we describe actions vividly? He jumped into the well. She lay on the ground. 尖叫奔跑跳入井中++screamed fled/ran away jumped into the well The man screamed/let out a scream of fear, ran/fled away and jumped into the well. 环顾四周躺倒在地用纸盖住脸++ glanced around lay down on the groundcovered her face with a piece of paper She glanced around, lay down on the ground and covered her face with a piece of paper. A chain of actions（动作链）：动作分解 1) The man let out a scream of fear, ran away and jumped into the well. 2) She glanced around, lay down on the ground and covered her face with a piece of paper. Tip 1: 动作三连结构（A, B and C结构） 1) The villagers caught sight of the man’s reaction.2) The villagers ran in all directions._____________________ the man’s reaction, the villagers ran in all directions.Catching sight of 哪吒跳下来。Nezha jumped off the wall. heardNezha ______ moms words, _______ and _______ off the wall. smiledjumped动作链：非谓语动词： _______ moms words, Nezha smiled and jumped off the wall. Hearing 主动被动不定式to doto be done现在分词doingbeing donehaving donehaving been done过去分词done? Tip 2 Non-finite verbs (非谓语动词) Tip 3: Add other modifiers （修饰语） 1) Add adverbsRow row row your boat,Gently down the stream,Merrily, merrily, merrily, merrily,Life is but a dream. gladly, cheerfully, joyfully, delightedly, excitedly...angrily, fearfully, anxiously... sadly, heart-brokenly, tearfully... surprisedly, astonishedly...swiftly, briskly(敏捷地), hurriedly; gently, carefully, strongly, softly, bravely....EmotionMovement The man let out a scream _________, ran away _________ and jumped into the well _________. 这位男子紧张地尖叫，赶紧跑开，勇敢地跳入井中。Practicenervouslyhurriedlybravely Hearing moms words, Nezha smiled ___________ and jumped off the wall _______________. Hearing moms words, Nezha smiled and jumped off the wall. cheerfully添加副词：quickly/briskly with excitement /delight/ joysurprise/amazeme