作文01 安徽卷 三年中考英语满分作文解析 .pdf

作文 01 安徽卷 2021 年 真题在线 假定你是李华，曾用攒下来的零花钱做了一件有意义的事并受到家人表扬。请你用英语写一篇短文向 校英文报投稿。内容包括： 1.事情经过； 2.个人感悟。 注意： 1.词数 80~100； 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3.文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称； 4.短文题目已给出，不计入总词数。 参考词汇：pocket money (n.零花钱); meaningful (adj.有意义的) Once I Was Praised _____________________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ 考题解析 【详解】 1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。要求以“Once I Was Praised”为题，结合提示进行写作，注意要点 齐全，可适当发挥。 2.写作指导：写作时要以第一人称来行文，时态以一般过去时为主。作文可分为三段，第一段引出话题； 第二段介绍事情经过；第三段描述个人感悟。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。 满分范文 One possible version 【答案】 Once I Was Praised Once I was praised because I did something meaningful with my pocket money. One day, I happened to know some students in a school were hungry for knowledge but they didn’t have enough books. I decided to offer my help. With all the pocket money I saved, I bought some books online, and gave them away to the school. My parents were very happy and praised me when they heard about it. They said I did a meaningful thing. I believe that every little bit helps. I will continue to do what I can to help others.