上海教育版九年级英语下册Module3 Unit6第5课时教学课件.ppt

Module 3 Sport and healthUnit 6 Caring for your health第5课时 Writing·下册· 目录02课堂练习01写作乐园 话题十四 给朋友的一封邮件【短文写作】假设你是Joe，你的朋友Simon最近因九年级功课压力大而变得少言寡语，与同学沟通困难。他在英语学习方面也有困难，而且考前紧张失眠。此外，他因父母让他放弃他喜爱的篮球活动而与父母吵架。请你根据下面的内容要点，用英语给他写一封电子邮件，帮他找到解决方案。80词左右。写作乐园 Dear Simon,________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours,Joe 【写作指导】在写作过程中要明确以下几点：1. 作文要求是写一封电子邮件，要注意电子邮件的格式；2. 作文开篇要简洁阐述写这封电子邮件的目的——帮朋友Simon找到解决方案，所以重点应该是写解决方案，不要过多地写问题，导致作文头重脚轻； 3. 朋友Simon遇到的问题有：与同学沟通困难、英语学习、紧张失眠、与父母吵架。写作过程中提出的解决方案要合理，能够相应地解决这些问题。同时要给予鼓励和支持。 【范文赏析】Dear Simon, I' m sorry to hear that you have had so much trouble since you got into Grade 9. I' m writing to give you some help. You used to be outgoing and now you don' t want to express yourself because of the stress from study. And you don' t get along well with your classmates. I think you should communicate with your classmates often. As for your English study, why not take notes in class and practise more after class? Learn to relax！Take a long walk before the exam. You love basketball but your parents asked you to stop it because they want you to pay more attention to your study. If I were you, I' d talk with them instead of arguing with them.I hope what I said could help you deal with your worries. Best wishes!Yours,Joe 课堂练习一、写作能力提升(一)请使用所给的短语造句。1. be busy with 忙于做……________________________________________________________________________________________________ The Smiths have been busy with housework since morning. 2. take up 学着做；开始做________________________________________________________________________________________________(二)请找出句子中错误的部分，并将正确的句子写在横线上。3. I saw she is talking with her mother.________________________________________________We should take up a hobby because hobbies are enjoyable and relaxing.I saw she was talking with her mother. 4.