高考英语读后续写现场阅卷感受分享.pptxVIP

高考英语读后续写阅卷心得感受评分时，应从内容、词汇语法和篇章结构三方面考虑：（1）创造内容的质量，续写的完整性以及与原文情境的融洽度（2）使用词汇和语法结构的准确性、恰当性和多样性（3）上下文的衔接和全文的连贯性根据内容情节确定档次—根据语言、篇章结构档次内浮动或根据具体情况适当调整档次；其他注意事项：词数少于120，酌情扣分单词拼写和标点符号是写作规范的重要方面，视其对交际的影响程度考虑。1.0分和1分怎么区别？空白卷0分，全文照搬原文0分，与题干毫无关系0分，但哪怕只有一句 I read it every day/They are happy，只要是与原文有关，即便句子是错误的，也能得1分；如果是词汇的罗列，连不成句，就是1-5分档，再根据内容和词数具体定分。2.及格线是15分吗？没有及格线定位，不用纠结于15/16分的定夺。专家解读及典型问题原文（310 词） The twins were filled with excitement as they thought of the surprise they were planning for Mothers Day. How pleased and proud Mother would be when they brought her breakfast in bed. They planned to make French toast and chicken porridge. They had watched their mother in the kitchen. There was nothing to it. Jenna and Jeff knew exactly what to do. The big day came at last. The alarm rang at 6 a.m. the pair went down the stairs quietly to the kitchen. They decided to boil the porridge first. They put some rice into a pot of water and left it to boil while they made the French toast. Jeff broke two eggs into a plate and added in some milk. Jenna found the bread and put two slices into the egg mixture. Next, Jeff turned on the second stove burner to heat up the frying pan. Everything was going smoothly until Jeff started frying the bread. The pan was too hot and the bread turned black within seconds. Jenna threw the burnt piece into the sink and put in the other slice of bread. This time, she turned down the fire so it cooked nicely. Then Jeff noticed steam shooting out of the pot and the lid starting to shake. The next minute, the porridge boiled over and put out the fire. Jenna panicked. Thankfully, Jeff stayed calm and turned off the gas quickly. But the stove was a mess now. Jenna told Jeff to clean it up so they could continue to cook the rest of the porridge. But Jeffs hand touched the hot burner and he gave a cry of pain. Jenna made him put his hand in cold water. Then she caught the smell of burning. Oh dear! The piece of bread in the pan had turned black as well.注意：1. 答题词数应为 1