英语中考作文写作解析.docx

2007 年杭州市 假如你叫 Liu Mei。前不久，你和来自英国的一位中学生 Allen 一起讨论了一个话题：the ways to learn English better 。现请你根据他的观点和你自己的观点，用英语给你的外籍老师Mr Nunan 写一篇关于这次讨论的汇报材料。 注意：1.开头和结尾部分已写好。 可适当增加谈论话题时经常用到的话语，使所写内容连贯。 所写内容必须包括上面表格中他的观点和你自己的至少三个观点。 词数：70 个左右。 His ideas His ideas Your ideas 1. reading English newspapers 1. ．．． 2. talking with friends in English 2. ．．． 3. seeing English films 3. ．．． Mr Nunan, Recently I have had a discussion about the ways to learn English better with Allen, a student from Britain. In his opinion, the best ways are reading English newspapers and talking with friends. He also believes that sometimes seeing English films isnt a bad way. I quite agree with him. However, I think, we can go surfing online, where we can find a lot of information in English to read. Besides, we can look for an e-pal from an English-speaking country so that we can get to know something about his or her country. Finally, learning English grammar well is also a great help. Liu Mei 点评：本文结构非常清楚，第一段阐述了 Allen 的观点，第二段则是叙述自己的观点。两段中间用“I quite agree with him.”连接起来，显得非常自然。同时作者在阐述自己和别人的观点的时候使用了不同的表达方式，比如 “in his opinion”, “he also believes”, “I think” 等， 避免了重复，增加了语言的多样化。本文的衔接非常地成功 ，比如第二段 “however”, “besides”, “finally” 等连接词使文章显得结构非常地紧凑，读来一气呵成。 2007 年重庆市 随着阳光体育运动在全国的开展，??每天锻炼一小时，健康工作 50 年，幸福生活一辈子。” 的理念深入人心，校园里出现了可喜的变化：运动时间延长了，运动项目增加了，学生体质增强了，校园生活丰富了。请以 Sports in Our School 为题给校刊写一篇报道。 内容要点提示： time for sports kinds of sports change of students? health and study change of school life 要求： 1.80 词左右，可适当发挥。 2. 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称等相关信息。 Sports in Our School Sports in Our School Sports in our school have changed a lot. Now we have more than three P .E. classes a week. and we have at least one hour to exercise every day. Students get so excited at these changes. More and more students take an active part in the ball games，running，and jumping on the playground. Our school life is becoming more wonderful. Doing sports is a good way to relax and keep fit. What?s more? Ahealthy body can help us study better and live