高中英语学考作文指导范文.ppt

12 100 12 100 12 100 12 100 Teaching Objectives(教学目的) By the end of this lesson you ll be able to find out the mistakes of the compositions given. find out what problems cause you not to get higher marks in your writing. know some practical ways to improve a composition. feel less scared(恐惧的) in writing. ;.; * Many people are warm-hearted donated money to Sichuan people. Include a beggar who called Xu Chao, and a shoeshine woman who called Wang Fang. On May 12, Sichuan happen a big earthquake. There are many people donated money. Because they all want to express their love. My classmates donating more 50 dollars. We all are Chinese. We must help the people who are in trouble. Chinese dont afraid of it! Sichuan happen a big earthquake. There are many people donated money. We all are Chinese. ;.; * The building of the factory will make lots of money for the city.It will let many people get jobs.Itll help the local economy to develop.But it will let out a lot of poisonous smoke and pollute the environment. Itll do harm to peoples health.It will produce loud noise. The nosie will influence the normal teaching of our school.I hope the government can give up the project. 假设政府将在某学校附近的河边修建一座化工厂，请你以该校学生的名义向媒体反映修建化工厂后产生的实际情况。陈述反对修建的理由。 好处：化工厂将为该市赚很多钱，解决很多人的就业问题，促进该市经济的发展。 坏处：化工厂将排放大量的有毒气体，污水，严重污染环境，危害人民身体健康，化工厂将释放很大的噪音，严重影响学校正常的教学。 建议：希望政府放弃该项修建计划。 ;.; * 导致低分的主要原因 问题1： 句型结构混乱 问题2： 汉式英语 问题3： 缺乏高级词汇， 句式单一 问题4： 表达不连贯， 缺乏过渡语 对策：主干优先，添枝加叶 对策：用英语进行思维 对策：使用高级词汇、 丰富句式和语法结构 对策：使用恰当的连接词 ;.; * 主干优先，添枝加叶 第一步：找出句子主干 例句：那个淘气的男孩没关水龙头就跑了。 第二步：确定主干的相应词汇 第三步：翻译句子主干 第四步：添加修饰成分 男孩 跑了 boy , run away The boy ran away. 那个 男孩 跑了。 淘气的 没关水龙头就 The naughty boy ran away. The naughty boy ran away without turning off the water. ;.; * 练习1： 穿红色羊毛衫的女孩是我们的班长。 The girl____________________________ is our monitress. 女孩 是 班长 (who is) in a red sweater 练习2： 她眼泪汪汪地离开了办公室。 She left the office. She left the office with tears in h