申请信之一模英语作文讲评.pptx

2019 包头一模作文讲评;一、存在问题; 申请信有很多种，比如求职申请、加入某组织或活动的申请、报考申请、留学申请等。写申请信的目的是让对方了解自己的经验、能力、成就、愿望等，因此个人情况的介绍应该是申请信的核心内容，尽可能的向对方得体地说明本人的长处，以便留下好印象，获得面谈的机会。 注意审题全面，不能遗漏要点，并要注意人称和时态的变化，避免出现逻辑混乱。;二、审题列纲;三、连词成句，组句成文;四、佳作赏析;4.1 开头：背景+目的;开头：背景+目的;;4.2 中间：自荐理由;;;;;;4.3 结尾：期望+感谢;;五、句式补充;I am confident my professional knowledge has prepared me to handle the job. 我相信我的专业知识能让我胜任这份工作。 I had good performance in every course，especially in... 我每门课成绩都很好，特别是…… I trust that I am capable of doing the work well. 我相信我能干好这份工作。 I believe that I am well qualified for the position as... 我相信我定能胜任作为……的工作。;六、范文赏析，总结提升;6.1 五三 P292 Writing 14 (2015 陕西) 假定你是李华，在校报英语专栏看到了学校“英语文化节”的一则招募启事。请阅读启事，并根据写作要点和写作要求写一封应征邮件。 ;6.2 五三 P289 Writing 2 (2018 浙江，第一节);七、迁移运用，实战演练;首段： Knowing that ... is intended/ scheduled to be held in...(地点+时间) and youre recruiting volunteers, Im writing to apply for... On hearing the inspiring news that..., I can hardly wait to recommend myself. I am writing to apply for /request the opportunity ... ;中间段（可以总分） 能力 be capable of... be competent to do... be qualified for... meet ones requirements have an edge on /over sb /sth= a slight advantage over...微弱的优势 如：I am competent to meet the requirements you have listed. ;中间段（可以总分） 1. 热情、有礼 1) With great enthusiasm and politeness, I am bound to ... 2) Enthusiasm and good manners, which are of significance to build a harmonius and friendly atmosphere, are also what I possess. 3) I make it my motto that a smile can make the world a better place. 4) Having been involved in some events to deal with foreigners, I do well in maintaining close relations and retaining dignity and mutual benefit with enthusiasm and politeness.;中间段（可以总分） 2. 熟悉中国文化 As a student majoring in art and a history lover, I have a thorough knowledge of traditional Chinese culture, which makes it possible for me to spread ... (be well acquainted with...) Brought up in a literary family with an intimate knowledge of profound traditional Chinese culture, I am quite