2020版中考英语新素养大一轮杭州（人教）专用（课件)：话题写作03　校园生活.pptx

杭州专版新课标（RJ）第一篇　教材考点梳理话题写作（三）校园生活【话题点睛】话题主要包括学生在学校的生活和学习情况。涉及的要点:(1)学校一天的学习时间及作息安排;(2)学习过程中碰到的学习问题;(3)校园生活中的交友问题;(4)国内外校园生活的异同;(5)校园生活中的一些学习或生活规则,如带手机问题和穿校服问题等;(6)校园内举行的活动和发生的事件等。典例分析典例分析　假定你是苏华,你最近认识的英国笔友David给你发了一封电子邮件,想了解你初中三年来在学习和生活方面的一些收获、困惑和感受。请认真阅读下面的邮件,根据邮件的内容及你的实际情况用英语回复。To: suhua@From: davidsmith@Subject: School lifeDear Su Hua,　Glad to hear youre graduating from junior high school. Im interested in how you feel about those three years of school life. Would you please tell me the following things? ·What do you like best about your school life?·Whats the biggest problem as a junior high school student?·Who has helped you most? And why?·Do you enjoy your school life? Why or why not?　I look forward to hearing from you soon.All the best,David [注意]1.词数:80左右,开头和结尾已经写好,不计入总词数;2.回复须包括所有要点,可适当发挥,使全文连贯、通顺;3.邮件中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。Dear David,　Thank you so much for your email. Im very happy to tell you about my school life. ?　How about your school life? Write to me soon.Best wishes,Su Hua【思路点拨】1.要点提炼:本文主要是谈论自己在学习和生活上的一些收获、困惑和感受。根据来信可知,文章主要从以下几个部分展开叙述:(1)对于学校生活,最喜欢的部分。(2)作为一名初中生,最大的问题是什么。(3)谁帮助自己最多以及原因。(4)是否喜欢自己的学校生活? 为什么(不)?2.确定时态:一般现在时和现在完成时。3.确定人称:第一人称。【写作架构】【基础写作】根据所给提示词补全下列各句。1.基础句 这是学习团队精神的好机会。(good) .→升格句 而且,这是学习团队精神的极好机会。(moreover, excellent) .It is/Its a good chance to learn team spirit.Moreover, its an excellent chance to learn team spirit.2.基础句 当我有困难时,我的英语老师总是来到我身边。(when) . .→升格句 无论何时我有困难,我的英语老师总是来到我身边。(whenever) . . When I am/Im in great need, my English teacher always comes to me. Whenever I am/Im in great need, my English teacher always comes to me. 3.基础句 她在初中时帮助我很多。(help) .→升格句 她是在初中时帮助我最多的人。(使用who引导的定语从句) . 4.基础句 我喜欢我的学校生活,因为它很美好。(nice) .→升格句总之,我喜欢我的学校生活,因为它是精彩有意义的。(in all, colorful and meaningful) . .She has helped me a lot in junior high school.She is the person who has helped me most in junior high school.I like/enjoy my school life, because it is/its nice.In all, I like/enjoy my school life, because it is/its colorful and meaningful.【连句成文】Dear Da