英语写作7.doc

英语写作 要求：英语书面表达思想的基本能力，文字切合主题，能正确表达思想，语意连贯，无重大语言错误 形式：提纲作文，看图作文，描述图表，根据所给文章写出内容提要或读后感。 试题分析及评分标准 2004年试题 The Goal of Life Directions: read the story in Chinese below, and then write a composition of no less than 150 words under the title of “The Goal of Life”. Your composition should be based on the story and the following outline: 1. What have you learned from the story? 2. What is the goal of your life? If you have achieved the goal of your life, what would you do? 目标 在英国有一位残疾青年。他双腿走起路来很困难，却凭着坚强的信念和毅力创造了一次又一次的壮举：他19岁时登上了世界最高峰珠穆朗玛峰；21岁时登上了阿尔卑斯山；22 岁时登上了乞力马扎罗山，28岁前他登上了世界上所有著名的高山。然而，就在28岁这一年他自杀了。原来在他11岁时，他父母在攀登乞力马扎罗山时不幸遭遇雪崩双双遇难。他的父母在临行前给他留下了遗嘱。希望他能像父母一样，登上世界上所有著名的高山。这位残疾青年把父母的遗嘱作为他人生奋斗的目标，当实现全部目标的时候，他感到前所未有的无奈和绝望。他留下遗言：“如今，功成名就的我感到无事可做了，我没有了新的目标…..” (14分) …….. (11分) After reading the story, I have learned from it that there was disabled English man who had climbed all the famous mountains before he was 28 years old and then he killed himself. Why did he kill himself? The answer is that he had accomplish his goal that his parents asked him to do so. So he felt that he had no new goal in his life. I, myself, am a doctor. Therefore my goal is to cure patients. When I see my patients suffering from one disease or another, I am feeling very miserable and sympathetic. Then I try my best to help them and make them recover soon. Life is beautiful, nobody has the right to make them suffering or deprive them of their right to enjoy life. So I am determined to help my patients recover. Form the first day I stepped into hospital and became a doctor, I have cured thousands of thousands of patients. Seeing their healthy smiling faces, I feel very happy. However, this isn’t enough, because there are many diseases which are incurable, such as AIDS. Therefore, there are a lot of goals for me to achieve. I will devote all my life energy to the great cause of medicine. (8分) There is a story that talks about a