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当前位置： 我的作文 - On Excessive Packging-第231051号作文 On Excessive Packging 查看要求 分享到: 打印 With the rapid development of our society giving present play a more and more important role in life. Presents can help indent distance between people which means faster to reach your goal! So in order to earn more economic gains. a lot of people who have a present shop package their products with unnecessary and well material to appeal people to buy their products . Beautiful gifts can better express our sincerity so, packing gifts seems indispensable. But here is the problem. First of all. packing box can bring environmental problem which can not be underestimated . Secondly. it can increase the cost of enterprise. Besides it can increase the burden on consumer. In my opinin green marketing is the key of solving packing problem. only to establish the concept of sustainable development and use green packing can we reduce the harmful effect to our life. 字数:144 提交次数:1 显示: 词汇: 79.5 词汇: 句子: 篇章结构: 内容相关: 排名:共235篇,本文排名80，最高分89,最低分32 评语： 作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；文中词汇表达用的较灵活，同时能够较恰当地使用学术词汇；文章层次不够分明，缺少组织，需注意文章整体的组织结构 类型 维度 测量值 参考范围 词汇 形符数 156 195~230 字数 144 166~208 类符数 92 93~115 平均词长 4.90 4.23~4.97 平均词长标准差 2.69 2.19~2.62 高频词汇占比 73% 77%~86% 学术词汇占比 10% 2%~7% 超纲词汇占比 5% 3%~8% 篇章连词 10 8~14 动词短语 8 7~17 段落 段落数 4 3~5 平均每段句数 3.00 2.49~5.52 平均每段词数 39.00 36.91~89.70 首段词数占比 44% 12%~43% 尾段词数占比 22% 6%~40% 首段句数占比 33% 11%~44% 尾段句数占比 17% 8%~41% 句子 句子数 12 11~17 平均句长 13 13~20 最长句词数 25 21~37 最短句词数 4 4~10 1~9词句子占比 41% 5%~32% 10~19词句子占比 41% 39%~70% 20~29词句子占比 17% 6%~36% 残句数 0 0~1 病句数 0 0~3 从句 从句总数 10 9~17 从句类型 3 4~6 不定式 2 1~5 现在分词 3 0~4 过去分词 0 0~1 主语从句 0 0~2 补语从句 0 1~5 wh-从句 0 0~4 关系从句 5 0~3 词性 连词 3% 3%~6% 名词 22% 17%~24% 动词 21% 16%~22% 副词 7% 5%~8% 形容词 22% 15%~20% 介词 12% 8%~12% 代词 4% 6%~12% 标点 8% 10%~14% 按 句 点 评 ? 显示全部 1.1 With the rapid development of our society giving prese