2016年全国高考英语满分作文.doc

2016年全国高考英语满分作文 篇一：2016年高考备考高考英语满分作文赏析(背诵佳选) 2016年高考备考高考英语满分作文赏析(背诵佳选) 一. 用词准确;表达地道 【北京卷高考英语】 【试题回放】 第一节情景作文(20分) 美国中学生jeff将要来你所在的红星中学学习中文，经协商安排住在你家。假设你是李华，请给Jeff写一封信，按照下图顺序介绍他来中国后的生活安排。 注意：1. 信的开头已为你写好。 2.词数不少于60。 Dear Jeff, stay with my family while you’re in Beijing. home, so like the delicious Chinese food there, and enjoy talking in our or swimming. It’ll be a lot of fun. stay here in Beijing a pleasant experience. Best wishes, Li Hua [名师点评] 作者根据图画将文章的要点概括完整，内容充 该校请你给她写封回信，假如你是李华，美国一所友好学校准备与该校格林先生来信询问有关情况。请你给她写封回 l 提出你喜欢的栏目。 l 简要说明理由。 1. 词数100左右。 2. 新的开头和结尾已为你写好。 3. 适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 4. 参考栏目：栏目—columnDear Mr. Green, I am very excited to learn that we are going to start a magazine together. That sounds great! And I definitely agree with you on that. Some of the columns which you mentioned in the letter are really my cup of tea. Say, 揷ulture express?gives us a better understanding of the world. Since people from different parts of the world have different values, it抯 necessary to learn from each other. This will offer a wonderful chance. Apart from that, 揵lurt out?is pretty good for Chinese students to learn English idioms and improve oral English. Last but not least, 揺ntertainment?is so cool! The popular singers, just fond of the trendy things. Well, I can’t list more. I really can’t wait to read that magazine! Yours faithfully, Li Hua 【名师点评】 这是一篇满分作文。由于这篇作文的出现，导致了安徽省该年的英语作文分数普遍偏低。仔细分析了这篇文章，写的的确是好，很地道的美式英语，一些词语的大胆使用，让人不得不猜测此人或者是家人可能有过国外生活的经历，否则这么地道标准的英语，可不是一朝一夕所能写出来的。比如说：my cup of tea, apart from that, oral English, last but least, celebrities, catchy和trendy的大胆运用，list, can#39;t wait to 简直是perfect! 二. 非谓语动词为作文添彩 【北京卷高考英语】 【试题回放】情景作文 假设你是红星中学高三一班的学生李华，“绿色行动”专栏写一篇以“Green Action in Our Class” 注意：词数不少于60 提示词：郊区April 12 is memorable because our class had a on that day. In the of trees, we all had a sense of feel it’s our duty to protect and beautify our environment. 【名师点评】 与环保结合，立意较好。文章思路清晰，要点连贯，分词短语作状语等较好的句式表达。 【试题回放】开放