2016专四写作专题讲座_图文.ppt

2. 好处/ 坏处 (1) 好处 增长知识：enrich one’s knowledge 开阔视野：enlarge/broaden one’s horizon 我们不仅能够收到教育，而且能够得到快乐。 Sth. educate(s) as well as entertain(s) us (2) 坏处（几乎没有） “过犹不及/ 欲速则不达” “Haste makes waste” eg. “Haste makes waste”. Often do we hear such proverb. That is to say spending too much time online to make friends will be harmful to us. 二、举例论证 （引言） 1. 我认为我们人类历史上充满着许多与之相关的例子，下面这个最具说服力。 Never do I remain suspicious of the view that our human history has been fraught with an overwhelming majority of corresponding examples, with the following being the foremost. 2. 在我所经历的所有事情当中，下面这个印象最深。 Among all the touching facts that I have ever experienced, the most impressive one is as follows. 3. 除了下面的例子，我想不到更好的了。 I can think of no better example other than the following one. eg. 2009 Will Tourism Bring Harm to the Environment? 例子一：黄金周的时候，众多游客蜂拥而至去爬黄山、在天安门广场徘徊，活在长城脚下拍照。所有这些游客都对环境造成了很大的压力； I can think of no better example other than the following one. During Golden Week, a host of tourists are climbing up Yellow Mountain, wandering around Tiananmen Square and taking their picture in front if the Great Wall. 例子二：他们造成了要有更多财力被用在这些景点，他们造成了堆积如山的垃圾，在珍贵的植被上践踏，把小动物吓跑。 All these people put a large strain on the environment; they require more resources to be directed to the area, produce mountains of garbage, trample on precious plants and scare away animals. 三、细节论证 1. 数据统计法 “根据统计，希望工程收到捐款上亿，它能够让更多的学生上学” According to a statistics, the money collected from Hope Project has reached as much as one hundred million, which can help many students finish their education. hundred、thousand、ten thousand twenty thousand、million ten million 、hundred million billion 模板句型：“According to a statistics, the money/number of 主题 has reached as much as数字，非限定性定从。” eg. 2009 Will Tourism Bring Harm to the Environment? According to a statistics, the number of visitors has reached as much as ten million, which bring huge profits to the GDP. * 修辞： ⑴. 明喻（simile） 暗喻（metaphor） busy bee deep ocean pure angel black co