B8U1写作叙述经历概要1.ppt

叙述经历 以及 后果影响 ;阅读下面短文，然后按要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文 When Sam first got to his boarding school with his parents, he was very happy. He thought he would be able to go home every weekend. When he was told he would not, he started crying because the thought of not seeing his parents was driving him crazy. He was given uniforms and all other things that he would need for the term. He started crying when it was time for his parents to leave. He was then taken to the dorm, where he saw other children happy. He tried as much as he could to fit in but could not because his mind was at home. He started feeling homesick (想家) and wanted to go homes as soon as possible.; He got sick soon because he could not eat the school food. He could not concentrate in the classroom. All he could think was being at home with his family. He had no mobile phone or other means to get in touch with his parents. He was angry and felt lonely. He thought his parents hated him and that was why they left him in a boarding school.;[写作内容] 1. 以约30个词概括上文的主要内容。 2. 以约120个词讲述一次你（或你的朋友）想家的经历，内容包括： ⑴时间、地点和起因； ⑵想家给学习和生活带来的影响； ⑶你（或你朋友）是如何应对的。 [写作要求] 1.作文中可以使用亲身经历或虚构的故事，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子。 2.作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。 [评分标准]概括准确，语言规范，内容何时，语句连贯。 ;记叙文Summary ;这个故事往往与阅读材料中的故事相类似，值得注意的是，所述经历一定要紧扣你要说明的主题。;引出经历的过渡句;4. 这篇文章/故事让我想起自己的一次……的经历。两年前, 我…… 但是当…… 结果…… The passage reminds me of my own experience of… Two years ago, I… But when… As a result…;语篇模板 叙述一次想家的经历(时间、地点、原因)。 The passage reminds me of my own experience of feeling homesick. When I was 10 years old, I depended on my parents for everything. However, they once sent me to my uncle’s home in another city because they were too busy to take care of me. At that time, I did miss my parents and feel lonely.;para3:; Homesickness not only influence me a lot in my study but also did great harm to my school life. First, the great loneliness stopped me from concentrating on my class and I couldn’t keep pace with my classmates. What’s worse, I couldn’t sleep