中式英语之二 词句再审视.ppt

“ ” “ ” 中式英语之二  词句再审视 河北农大外院 郭海波 2015.11.17 CONTENTS 1.多余的用词/unnecessary words 2.句子结构/sentence structure 中式英语之用词 1.1多余的名词与动词/ unnecessary nouns and verbs 1.2多余的修饰词/unnecessary modifiers 1.3同义堆叠/ redundant twins 1.4重复指称/saying the same thing twice, and repeated references to the same thing 1.多余的用词/unnecessary words Vigorous writing is concise. A sentence should contain no unnecessary words, a paragraph no unnecessary sentences, for the same reasons that a drawing should have no unnecessary lines and a machine no unnecessary parts. ----the elements of style [by William Strunk, Jr, and E.B. White] 1.多余的用词/unnecessary words To accelerate the pace of economic reform. There have been good harvest in agriculture. Living standards for the people in both urban and rural areas continue to rise These hardships are temporary in nature. The development of our economy in the future will, to a large extent, depend on… We should adopt a series of measures to ensure that… 必讲 1.多余的用词/unnecessary words We must make an improvement in our work. It is impossible for us to accomplish the transformation of the whole society overnight. They should conduct a careful examination of… Until China realizes industrial modernization An improvement must be made in our work. Approval should be given to all these projects. To make an investigation of To have a dislike for 必讲 1.多余的用词/unnecessary words We adopted the policy of withdrawal It is especially necessary to make great efforts to assimilate the achievement of other cultures. New innovations A family relative Now the government is working hard to improve taxation Imports of foreign automobiles have declined sharply this year 必讲 必讲 1.多余的用词/unnecessary words We must arrive at the station on time in order to be punctual 必讲 中式英语之造句 2.1名词肿胀症/ the noun plague 2.2 代词与先行词/ pronouns and antecedents 2.3短语与子句的位置/the placement of phrases and clauses 2.4垂悬成分/dangling modifiers 2.5 平行结构/parallel structure 2.6逻辑连词/logical connec