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跟同学们想说的话： 一、对张婷婷说的话： 1有人称错误； 2但这篇文章确实是一篇好文章，全文只有一个错误：collect litter写成clean litter. 建议： 所以写作时要注意审题，注意人称。 作文中的错误 1. 一本书： 我的书： 这本书： 王天宇的书： 单数名词前可以有四种词修饰， 有且只有一个： a book my book this book Wang Tianyus book 指示代词( )、 冠词( ) 名词所有格( ) 形容词性物主代词 a, the an, （my, your, his, her, its, our, your, their） this, that Bettys 2. 改错： 1.my a book 2.my this book 3.This is book. 4.Brother is drawing in the bedroom. 1.my book 3.This is a book. 2.my book 4.My brother is drawing in the bedroom. 八My class This is my classroom.There are 35 desks and 35 chairs in it. There are 20 boys and 15 girls in my class. Theres a clock on the wall. Our teacher is Miss Wang.We all love her. 八、书面表达（满分20分） My Birthday My birthday is on May 14th. On thay day ,my mother always buys me a big birthday cake and cooks delicious food. I often ask my friends to my party. They give me presents like a notobook, a scarf and a schoolbag. I like them very much. After having a meal, we sing songs and play games. I always have a very happy birthday. 彭振坤、王天宇、张永维做得很好，得满分。 三. Stand near the window.× 1.They are near the window. They are at home. Near the window./At home. 2. Yes,she is.× Sitting× She is sitting. 3. He is looking at a boy. 4. Its under the tree near their house. 5. Hes going to school. 四1time/trip2restaurant3moment 4star5drives6leaving7lying 8places9Most still 书面表达： 作文中的错误： 1.错句.Is six oclock. Now is at six oclock. Now is evening six oclock. Is evening six oclock now. Its at six oclock in the evening now. 1.正确Now it is six oclock in the evening. 2.错句： Today is on friday. Today is on friday. 2. 正确： Today is Friday. 3.错句：Grandpa is playing cheese. 3.正确：My grandpa is playing chess. 4.错句：Father is look at books. 正确：My father is reading books. 5.错句：My mother is do dinner. 正确：.My mother is cooking a meal. 6.错句: We are usually have dinner a