雅思OG写作Test4Task2解析.docx

智课网IELTS备考资料 雅思OG写作Test4 Task2解析 摘要： 备考雅思写作必备资料是什么呢？当然是雅思OG写作。小马小编带来雅思OG写作Test4 Task2解析，想要提高雅思写作成绩的考生要好好利用这份不错的备考资料。  小马 过河为考生做了 雅思 OG写作Test4 Task2的解析。  雅思OG写作审题要领(Task focus)  这道题属于大作文中的政府类话题。题干指出了一个社会现象,即“在有些国家,越来越多的人们由于吃了过多快餐而导致健康问题。因此,政府有必要提高这类食品的税收”。问考生是否赞同这个观点。这是典型的辩证型题目。考生需要提出自己的观点,并给出恰当的理由来支撑自己的观点。  雅思OG写作写作思路(Thinking before writing)  首先从观点上来讲,考生可以放开思路,先考虑自己是否比较赞同题目中让政府“增加税收”的方法,若  认为比较可行,那就想想理由是什么;如果觉得这个想法没有道理,那就需要讲出理由,同时给出自己的  观点。辩证类题目一般的结构是开头先讨论题目,表达自己是否同意题目观点,然后用二或三个主体段给  出理由,也可以写个让步段,最后结尾段总结全文,给出自己的观点。这篇范文分为四段,首段讨论了话  题背景,引出下文;第二段从经济的角度进行讨论;第三段从消费主体的角度进行论证;结尾段总结全  文,给出观点。  雅思OG写作范文演示(Sample analysis)  Model Response  The growth of the fast food industry has, without doubt, impacted on the eating habits and the health of many societies around the world. Diabetes, high cholesterol, heart and respiratory problems are all on the rise due to fatty and sugar rich food. However, the question is whether higher tax would improve this situation or not.  From an economic point of view, higher tax might seem sensible. In countries such as the USA, Australia and Britain, the healthcare system spends a large part of its budget on people with diet-related health problems. It could be argued that these people have caused their own  illnesses because of their choice of food. In this case, why should they expect the state to pay for their treatment? The tax could help fund the healthcare system.  However, we also need to consider which socio-economic group consumes fast food as the main part of their diet. Statistics indicate that lower income groups eat more of this food than wealthier people. One possible reason for this is that fast food is far cheaper than fresh produce. This is because many governments offer large subsidies to farmers who provide products for the fast food industry, such as corn, wheat and beef. Fruit and vegetables,