托福写作不可取的10种开头方式..docx

智课网TOEFL备考资料托福写作不可取的10种开头方式 摘要： 托福写作不可取的10种开头方式，今天，小编为同学们带来的内容是10种托福写作开头不可取，希望同学们通过阅读对托福写作考试有一定的帮助。下面，和小编一起来看看新托福写作中的一些案例吧。 “害死人” 托福 写作开头之六：过分简单没有重点(喷血指数：☆☆) 典型失败案例：Topic-The importance ofenvironmental protection This issue is surely very important, lets talkabout it! “害死人” 托福写作 开头之七：用词不当 表达不准 (喷血指数：☆☆) 典型失败案例：Topic-Should college students be allowed to get married? I think college students should not be allowed to get married because they are very youngand so we cant take the responsibility to form a family。 “害死人”托福写作开头之八：意思重复原地踏步(喷血指数：☆☆☆) 典型失败案例：Topic-Your opinion on DINK families My opinion on DINK families is that DINK families is not a good thing. And it is a bad thing.It brings no benefits to our society and it is even sometimes harmful to our society。 “害死人”托福写作开头之九：中国俗语胡乱翻译(喷血指数：☆☆☆☆☆) 典型失败案例：Topic 1-Is it good to have a large family? I think it is good to have a large family. Because we Chinese believe a sentence: “Many sons,many lucks”…… 正确说法：Happiness lies in having many children Topic 2 -Should we pretend to know everything or admit our ignorance? We all know, our Chinese old fathers and grandfathers said: “Know is know, dont know isdont know”…… Topic 3- Do you think ones character is greatly influenced by his/her family? Chinese old words says very good: Dragon born dragon, phoenix born phoenix, rats soncan make hole…… Topic 4- The advantage of being a nice person I believe one sentence:“A good person is all life safe”. We Chinese people always say: “Goodhas good pay, bad has bad pay”。 “害死人”托福写作开头之十： 观点武断 态度强硬 (喷血指数：☆☆☆) 典型失败案例：Topic1-The importance of confidence In my opinion, confidence is the most important thing for a person. All the successfulpeople in the world are full of confidence. While those people who dont have confidence,they all have failed。 Topic 2 - The solution to the traffic problem I think to solve the traffic problem, very easy! For those who dont obey the tra