英语专题6第5课时夹叙夹议文的写作要领详解.ppt

* (珠海市2011年5月高三综合测试〈二〉) 阅读下面的短文，然后按照要求，写一篇150词左右的英语短文。 A passenger told an air hostess that he needed a cup of water to take medicine when the plane just took off. She told him that she would bring him the water in ten minutes. Thirty minutes later, when the passengers ring for service sounded, the air hostess realized it at once. She was kept so busy that she forgot to deliver him the water. As a result, the passenger was held up to take his medicine. She hurried over to him with a cup of water, but he refused it. In the following hours on the flight, each time the air hostess passed the passenger, she would ask him with a smile whether he needed help or not. But the passenger never paid attention to her words. When he was going to get off the plane, the passenger asked the air hostess to hand him the passengers booklet(意见簿). She was very sad. She knew that he would write down sharp words, which might result in the loss of her job. But with a smile she handed it to him. Off the plane, she opened the booklet, and cracked a smile, for the passenger put it, “On the flight, you asked me whether I need help or not for twelve times in all. How can I refuse your twelve sincere smiles？” Thats right! It was the twelve smiles of the air hostess that touched the passenger deeply and of course she wouldnt lose her job! 【写作内容】 1. 以约30个词概括短文的内容要点； 2. 以约120个词谈谈微笑对人们的情感或行为的影响，内容包括： (1)你是如何看待微笑的作用的； (2)谈谈你所经历的让你最感动或给你印象最深刻的一次微笑； (3)你对微笑的感悟。 【写作要求】 1. 作文中可使用自己亲身的经历或虚构的故事，也可以参照阅读材料的内容但不得直接引用原文中的句子； 2. 文章中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。 One possible version： An air hostess forgot a passengers requirement, which made him angry. Though during the whole flight the passenger paid no attention to her, she still served him politely. Finally he was touched by her sincere smiles. Once I failed in a math exam, I had been crying for a whole afternoon. Knowing what had happened, Mom came by my side, stro