大学英语写作辅导重点.ppt

(1). 先因后果 Since I have changed my curriculum to law enforcement, there have been amazing consequences. First of all, I am now interested in my courses. I am so interested, in fact, that I have done a lot of extra reading for the course. Also, my parents are much more involved with what I am doing in school since my father is a policeman. Finally, my grades have shown remarkable improvement. I expected better grades to result form the switch, but I never thought I would get all the A’s I have been getting. (2). 先果后因 Guiyou Restaurant is losing business for three major reasons. First, customers are staying away because of the unsanitary conditions in the restaurant. The tables are often messy and the floors dirty. In addition, the service is poor. The waiters and waitresses are generally slow and unfriendly. The waiters and waitresses wear uniforms. Most important of all, customers are not pleased with the food at Guiyou Restaurant. The meals are of poor quality and overpriced. 英语写作技巧? 一．写作的目的及要求 二、评分原则 三、短文写作 目的：测试学生用英语书面表达思想的能 力，能够直接有效地测出考生综合 运用语言的能力，较准确地反映考 生的英语水平。 一．写作的目的及要求 要求: 语义连贯，表达正确，无重 大语法错误。题目的内容包括科技， 社会，文化，或日常生活等方面的一 般常识。题目形式多种多样，有提纲 作文，段首句作文，关键词作文，图 表作文，书信作文，和规定情景作文 等。 1.?四级作文题采用总体评分方法。阅卷人员就总的印象给出奖励分，而不是按语言点的错误数目扣分。 2.?从内容和语言两个方面对作文进行综合评判。内容和语言是一个统一体。作文应表达题目所规定的内容，而内容要通过语言来表达。要考虑作文是否切题，是否充分表达思想，也要考虑是否用英语清楚而适切的表达思想，也就是要考虑语言上的错误是否造成理解上的障碍。 二. 评分原则 考生要有较坚实的语言功底，具有一定的英 语短文的写作知识，而且也要具备一定的写 作技巧。下面，我们拟就段落写作讲解四级短文写作。 三、短文写作 段落写作 ? 一．段落的组成 段落大多由三个部分组成： 主题句(Topic sentence)； 扩展句（Developing sentences）； 结尾句(Ending sentence). 1.???主题句 主题句表明全段是关于什么及讨论什么的段落中心句，即：明确地表示全段要展开的中心点,四级短文写作中最好是把主题句放在段首 。 E.g. Smoking is harmful to people’s health. E.g. Smoking is harmful to people’s health. Medical science has now proved that smoking can cause lung cancer and other diseases such as emphysema. Your chances of having a heart a